Stories like this one with the quality your team has put into it is something I've craved from this niche since I found it. My only gripe is that the relationship feels like I missed 90% of it. 

The buildup is perfect, though I feel like Amy doesn't explore her attraction to Chloe (or women) enough before their first night together and I feel like there should have been some buildup to her being able to 'handle' Chloe. Chloe is very 'blessed' and probably more than Amy is used to from other partners. 

All in all, I loved this story and want as much content as your team can produce. If I had lottery winnings, there'd be a check in the mail for your team for sure. If this story continues to grow, or if other stories are made with similar...ahem...tags, then I would love to come back and support your team further. Thank you all again and I look forward to your next product.